I went to Jolly pasta near my school in July 22 with my friend Haruna and my circle’s senior. We ate this picture’s spaghetti for these days’s lunch. I ate peperoncino. I often eat it there. It is my favorite food. It is little hot, but I like it. Haruna ate carbonara. My circle’s senior Satoshi ate tomato cheese spaghetti. I think that all spaghetti looked like delicious. We talked a lot of things when eat it. Mainly we talked about love. I heard some idea. I was so study for love. I had a very interesting time.

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Today's schedule.

Good evening! I took three tests today. It was so hard for me. I am very reflecting. I should study very hard. I will take seven tests in next week. I have a lot of tests, because I am studying about librarian. It is hard, but I think it is very useful for my future. I am thinking that I will do my best for next week’s tests. If I pass the test next week, I have a big vacation. It is summer vacation! I am waiting for it so much. I want to play more.

After school I went to the civic library near my university by my car. I returned the books. Those were used at report. There were so useful. It rained in buckets this time.

My friend and I went to the café. We like there. We often go there. I ate mil crepe. I like it very much. I ate there it first time, but it was delicious. I want to eat again. I drank ice coffee. It was so deep. It was matched for my cake. My friend ate chocolate cake and drank blend coffee. We talked long time there and my car. I like talking with my friend. This time is so important for me. I had very funny time. I will report from now on.

http://www.cocoro-cafe.jp/lab/index.html

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I love...

Good evening. Today I introduce my favorite cosmetics. Do you like cosmetics? I like it very much. I am interested in it since I was elementary school student. Now, I am having this feeling so much. Especially, I like ANNASUI very much. Do you know it?

It is favorite brand all over the world. This brand’s designer is Annasui. She is Chinese-American second. She was born Michigan in America She made own brand “ANNASUI” in 1980. This brand’s main motif is rose and butterfly, and image color is violet. This brand has clothes, fashion small article, and cosmetics.

I like cosmetics very much. This package motif is so cute and elegant. Main color is black I think so. I like it. Especially, I like ANNASUI’s nail. It is so excellent! I like to correct it, and I decollate it in my room’s lack. There are cute! I always use this nail. It is fast to dry out. It is good point. Also, it not becomes harden quite, because I can use long time. This nail’s price is little high, but it worth for me. I recommend for you this nail. I want to correct it from now on too.

ANNASUI cosmetics official homepage☆http://www.annasui-cosmetics.com/catalogue/index.htm

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My summer vacation plan!

Hello. I am waiting for this summer vacation very much, because I want to play and I have a lot of schedules in summer vacation. I want to travel at Huistenbosch in Nagasaki, Oita, Kyoto and Seoul in Korea. I like Huistenbosch very much. I often go there with my family and friends. I have been to there about fifteen times. There is so beautiful place. There are a lot of beautiful flowers and view. Especially, I like season of tulip. The tulip bulbs are shooting up everywhere. There are many colorful tulips. The smells are good. When I see it, I become happily. There’s night view is so good too. Especially, I like winter season’s view. There are a lot of illuminate at night. Huistenbosch’s main tower’s illumination is good. Christmas season’s firework and a laser beam are beautiful. There are many valuation and colorful. Huistenbosch’s hotel is very wonderful. When I stayed there, I thought that I become a princess, so much there are good! I like Forest Villa very much. There is like a cottage. There is two-story and have a porch. I can relax and past comfortably. I often stay with my family. My family likes there too.

I want to go to Oita, because I like Oita’s fried chicken. When I went there in this spring vacation with my circle friend, I ate fried chicken. When I ate it, I was moved. It was so delicious! I like this the best in all fried chicken. Please eat this one chance. Oita’s coastline is good too. I want to drive there. If I drive there, I become so good feeling absolutely. I want to Umitamago. There is a aquarium. I want to see sea otter and dolphin. I want to take a hot spring. Beppu is famous place at hot spring. When I was a child, I stayed there. Beppu hot spring is clean and luxurious. I want to there take a bath slowly!

I want to go to Kyoto, because I think there are a lot of greatful views. When I was junior high school student I went to there by school trip, I was moved that. Especially I like Kiyomizu temple. Top of the temple’s view is great! I recommend this view. I want to go some traditional place for example, Kinkakizi, Ginkakuzi, Seimei shrine. I am interested in Japanese history, because I want to go there. I also want to go Arasi Mountain. I have not been there, because I want to go there once.

I want to go to Seoul with my mother. We love Seoul! We always go there together. I want to buy a lot of cosmetics and clothes there. I think that Korea’s things are very cheap. I often hoard some objects. I want to eat reimen. It is cold noodle like harusame. It is low calorie. If you want to eat, I recommend it.

I want to go a lot of summer festival. I am planning to fire work in Tamana with my friend. I told my friend that “Tamana’s fire work is so beautiful!” When I hear it, I want to go there so much. I want to eat a lot of foods there. I think there will traffic jam that day, because I must have much time. I will wear yukata. When I think that day, I become very happy! I am so excited. I think I want to spend happy summer vacation!

Huistenbosch official wab site☆http://http//english.huistenbosch.co.jp/

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Fashion☆

I love fashion very much! Do you like fashion? I like clothes. Especially, I like denim and shoes. I have a lot of clothes in my room’s closet. I love them. I always go shopping once a month. I often go shopping Tenjin in Fukuoka. There are a lot of my favorite shops. I often go to Canal city Daimyo and Tenjin core. Fukuoka has many select shops. I also go to the Marinoa city with my family. There have a lot of cheep shops. We always buy a lot of clothes and shoes. We often go to Starbucks coffee after shopping. It is very delicious. I like Starbucks very much!
Today, I bought a skirt and t-shirts. I like monotone and mannish fashion now. I like hat very much. I like black, white, gray and silver color. I always take in black color. I like black when I was junior high school student. I like fashion when I was elementary school student. When I was elementary school student and junior high school student, my dream was fashion designer, because I entranced high school of dress design. But become a fashion designer is so difficult. I did not have a lot of clothes design’s idea, because I gave up my dream. But I liked clothes. I like clothes now too, because I want to work at shop staff. It is my current dream. I think that I will challenge my dream in this summer. I think it is hard work. But I will do my best.

BACKS's home page☆http://www.the-backs.com/index2.html

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Essay 1-03b: Lilo and Stitch

I watched the movie, Lili and Stitch. Do you know it? It is Disney movie. I like Disney movies very much. It is emotional, cute and funny movie. I like Disney character too. There are so cute. I have a lot of Disney characters stuffed animals. I watched Lilo and Stitch first time. This movie is different from other Disney movies. This movie tells us for several important things. When I saw this movie, I was much moved. I think this movies main theme is love and family. I recommend this movie very much.

I introduce Lilo and Stitch’s family relationship. This movies main character is Lilo and Stitch. Lilo is a girl. She is five years old. She has a sister named Nani. Their parents died, so Lilo lives alone with her sister Nani. They are good friends, but sometimes they quarrel over trifles. They live Kauai Island in Hawaii. This story’s place is Hawaii. Hawaii has a lot of beautiful view. This movie’s view is beautiful. Hawaii has a language. For example, “hula” and “ohana”. “Fula” means hula dance. It is slowly dance. “Ohana” means family. Hawaii’s people think that they are family. I like this opinion.

I introduce this movies main character Stitch. He is a man. He is a pet for Lilo. Sitich knew about only destroy objects, because he is alien. He was very rough. He was so bad boy. But in the course of contact with Lilo, he has a good heart gradually. He becomes good friends with Lilo. Lilo received him for tenderly as “ohana”. Lilo said that, “Ohana” is always together. Lilo is his godfather.
He is an alien, because he is little strange. He did not like water. He cannot swim, but while he watched Lilo played surfing he become he can put up with water. He always pretend is a dog. His friend’s “Angel” is alien too. She can sing. Her looks is cute. Her body’s color is pink. They are very smart and powerful.

This movie’s dance is “hula”. It is Hawaiian dance. It looks so slowly. “Hula” means dance. It is Hawaii’s traditional dance. It looks like finger language. Fula’s movement has some means. When they dance “fula”, they wear muumuu. Muumuu is Hawaiian women’s full dress. It has a lot of kind. They put on the lei at their neck. Lei are garland. Sometimes they put on the flower at their head. I thought “fula” is easy dance, but it is surprisingly difficult and hard. I want to try this.

Lilo likes surfing. She plays it once in a while. Hawaii has a lot of surfing player, because Hawaii’s sea is so beautiful and has good wave. I think that surfing is very difficult sports, but I want to carnage it if I go to the Hawaii.

Lilo and Stitch official web site☆http://disney.go.com/disneyvideos/animatedfilms/liloandstitch2/

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I want to...

I like go traveling. I always go to travel when I have a vacation and free time. This spring vacation, I went to Korea with my mother. Korea is near Japan, because we can go there at once. We love Korea very much. Korea is funny country. There has a lot of old traditional. I recommend to you go to Korea.

I want to go to New Zealand now. I am thinking that I want to go there since I was junior high school student. I think that New Zealand is very beautiful place. There has a lot of nature. I want to see those. When I watched the movie which name is "Road of the ring", I was much moved, because this movie's view is so beautiful. This movie was filmed in New Zealand. I want to go there for home stay! For that reason, I have to study English more. Going to New Zealand is my dream. I want to go there someday.

http://www.newzealand.com/Japan/

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I like...

Hello!
Today, I introduce my favorite models.　I like fashion magazine’s models and TV performer. Especially, I like ViVi’s and PINKY’s models. They are so cute, cool and they have nice body. I am wishful for them. I like watch theirs blog. I always watch it when I have a free time. I think that they are shining! I want to become like them, so I am doing diet. My summer’s goal is reduce three kilogram in my weight. I want to wear bikini in the sea!! I will do try my best.

Fujii Rena's blog☆http://www.lenalenalena.net/blog/

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Essay 1-02b: My happy university life essays!

I introduce our school’s club. There are a lot of club at Kumamoto Gakuen University. For example sports club, culture club, active club and more. They do various activities. For instance driving, playing sports, going to shopping, eating dinner, going to the park and so on.

I and my friend Haruna belong to Lacrosse club. There are about 50 people. We are all good friends. This April a lot of fresh man come in our club. I am so happy. They are so cute! We play sports every Wednesday. We play badminton, volley ball, basketball, boring, billiards etc. I played billiards for the first time the other day. It was difficult for me, but interesting! I want to do this again. After sports we always go to joyful. We talk about a lot of things. I like this time so much.

My friend Kumi and Hanako belong to Youth Hostel club. They go to drive every 10 and 30. They go touring and camping at summer vacation and spring vacation. I think that they enjoying club activity. They told me “Our club is so fun”. Youth Hostel club has a lot of fresh man too.

Our university is so freedom. We can study enough, we can play enough, and we can work enough! All things you can you like. Our school has a lot of books. Our school’s library is so big, clean, silent and comfortable. I like this place. We can read a lot of books freely.

I think our school is very interesting. We can some things you like. I am so full now. I like play with my circle friends. I am very enjoying this time. We went to Amakusa, Oita and Aso the one day. If you can come in my circle, you can enjoy every day. It is certain. I advise you come in some circle and you can enjoy school life. But you should study too. I think it is important that enjoy go together, and you can enjoy your school days so much the better.

[342 words]

Portofolio Writing III

Student ID: 08135

Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1C



(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links to blog posts	Dates yyyy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
1-01a (2009.04.08)	Who am I	2009.04.08	3	295	1	0	0	0
1-01b (2009.04.20)	Letter to my host family	2009.04.21	4	295	0	0	0	0
(1-01c)	Letter to my host family	2009.06.10	5	296	0	0	0	0
1-02a (2009.06.01)	University　Life　esseys	2009.06.01	5	322	0	0	0	0
1-02b (2009.07.06)	My happy university life essays!	2009.07.8	5	342	0	0	0	0
(1-02c)
1-03a (2009.06.29)	"Lilo and Stitch"	2009.06.30	5	413	0	0	1	0
1-03b (2009.07.13)	Lilo and Stitch	2009.o7.12	5	470	1	1	1	0
Totals	---	---	32	2,433	2	1	2	0

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

• ...

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]

• ....

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates: yyyy.mm.dd	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
BR 1-01	"Wizard Wagoo"	2009.04.21	109	0
BR 1-02	"Vampire Killer"	2009.05.20	147	0
BR 1-03	"Clothes"	2009.05.22	163	0
BR 1-04	"The History of Money"	2009.05.23	150	1
BR 1-05	"Garileo Galilei"	2009.05.27	66	0
BR 1-06	"Thomas Edison"	2009.05.28	60	0
BR 1-07	"Celebrating New Year"	2009.05.28	78	1
BR 1-08	"The Ugly Ducking"	2009.06.06	98	0
BR 1-09	"Anna goes to the zoo"	2009.06.11	66	0
BR 1-10	"Danny's Dream"	2009.06.11	109	0
BR 1-11	"Pet Dogs and Working dogs"	2009.06.24	82	0
BR 1-12	"Australian State Plants"	2009.06.24	79	0
---	---	Totals:

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? ___ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ... ... ...	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...

2. ...

3. ...

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

• ...

• ...

• ...

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

• I had to post more blogs.
  

  
  

• I had to study words
  

  
  

• ...

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).

2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.

3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

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License:

This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).

I'm lovin' it!

Hello. I went to “Jolly pasta” yesterday’s after school with my friend. This picture is yesterday’s my friend’s and my lunch. I ate this side’s spaghetti. This is peperoncino. I like this very much. When I go to café I often eat peperoncino pasta! Peperoncino is so hot, but very good taste for me. I like hot food very much. Do you like hot food?

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