2- 02b: Website Reviews

I decided that I would write my essay about fashion, because I like fashion and I am interested in fashion very much since I was young. I think that fashion is so near things for us, so we put on the clothes every day. I like cosmetics too. I think cosmetic is part of the fashion. Making up is important for women. We make up every day. When I have a free time, I usually reading fashion magazines and beauty magazines. When I see fashion magazines and beauty magazines, I became happy and funny! I choose three homepages. There are Coach, ANNASUI and MAC’s homepages. I think that there are attractive.

At first, I saw Coach’s homepage. Do you know Coach? There is one of famous super brand. The reason I chose this homepage is I always see this homepage. When I saw this homepage first time, I felt this is so fashionable. This homepage have shoes and bag. It is impressive to me. This homepage is monotone, so it is fashionable and cool. This homepage’s top page has a lot of new Coach’s item. It is good at seeing and when I searching these items, I can discovery quickly.

Next, I saw ANNASUI’s homepage. I like ANNASUI’s cosmetics when I was young, because ANNASUI’s cosmetic package is so cute and beautiful. My homepage's first impression is so cute. This homepage has a lot of violet, also chandelier and shoes are colorful. This top page has a girl. She is putting in this brand’s new items. For example she is putting one-piece, shoes, tights and more. There are traditional. I think that I see the girl looks like a doll. Also top page has some antique furniture. There are has good atmosphere like ANNASUI.

At last, I saw MAC’s homepage. There are a lot of new item’s cosmetics. I like this cosmetics very mush, so there are so good items for me. There is so popular for a lot of people. There’s package is simple. Almost color is black. There are not colorful. It is good, because there are so cool!
My first impression is this homepage is cool. I become that I want to this shops cosmetics. I thought that the girl is cute, because her make is colorful. I think that she is beautiful. This homepage is gorgeous. I think that it is preparing for Christmas. I think that Christmas season will sell a lot of quantity’s cosmetics for Christmas present. I want these cosmetics for Christmas present! If I give it, I become so happy.
This homepage is changing some screen. I think it is good, because I can some cosmetics without mouse click. It is kind for watchers.

I thought homepage is important, because we always watch homepages when we use the computers and cell phones. We are always checking about new information, so we should make good homepages. I think that Coach, ANNASUI and MAC’s homepage are all good. I think a lot of people are checking there homepages.

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Essay 1-01b: Letter to my host family

Hello. My name is Yuria. I am nineteen years old. My birthday is May 13th. My hobby is listening to music, reading magazines, eating some foods and driving. I got a driver license October. It was very difficult. But I practiced very hard. Now I go to school everyday by my car. I like driving to difficult places. Last week I went to Tosu premium outlet by my car with my mother and my brother. I drove my car. I enjoyed it.

I introduce my family. My family has six people, my grandfather, grandmother, father, mother and brother. My father likes clothes. I like clothes too, and we often go shopping. My father is a teacher. He will go to Kurokami elementary school at this April. My mother is good at cooking. My mother's dishes are very delicious. She teaches me how to cook. My mother likes to travel. This March, mother and I went to Korea. We love travel. We went to Korea, Hawaii, Shikoku, Yamaguchi, Kyoto, Tokyo, Osaka, Kyushu, Hiroshima and Shiga. We will go to France someday. We went to go to Versailles Places!

My brother is fifteen years old. He plays badminton very well. He practices it everyday. His hobby is listening to music. He has a lot of CDs. We also go on a drive. Next, we will go to Aso.

I introduce my club. My club is lacrosse. We have about twenty five people. We play every Wednesday. We play badminton, basketball, bowling, driving and so on. After that, we eat dinner. Always we go to joyful. We are friends. I am waiting for April, because a lot of freshman will come. This year, I have a target. It is a secret. But I will do my best.

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